Comments on: Perkins Coie partner to lead computer and video game group http://news.filefront.com/perkins-coie-partner-to-lead-computer-and-video-game-group/ News for Gamers Mon, 09 Nov 2009 17:36:36 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: williams http://news.filefront.com/perkins-coie-partner-to-lead-computer-and-video-game-group/comment-page-1/#comment-1052 williams Thu, 24 May 2007 04:23:56 +0000 http://news.filefront.com/perkins-coie-partner-to-lead-computer-and-video-game-group/#comment-1052 Not sure what happened to your comments. I didn't delete them. Technically the way I wrote it is correct, but you are right that it would be better to add "he" in there. If you'd like to email me, it's wdsnizek@vt.edu Not sure what happened to your comments. I didn’t delete them. Technically the way I wrote it is correct, but you are right that it would be better to add “he” in there.

If you’d like to email me, it’s wdsnizek@vt.edu

]]> By: warren http://news.filefront.com/perkins-coie-partner-to-lead-computer-and-video-game-group/comment-page-1/#comment-1032 warren Thu, 24 May 2007 00:59:16 +0000 http://news.filefront.com/perkins-coie-partner-to-lead-computer-and-video-game-group/#comment-1032 Dear William, Sorry, can't edit posts here. You can delete the comments if you want. Doesn't bother me. I'm just a bit irritated about the errors and have no way of contacting people privately. But anyway, I don't think the way your sentenced is worded is wrong, just a bit confusing and clunky. It does make sense without using the "he". But if you use the "he" your sentence will be a lot clearer. And if you use "he", then you can take out "probably". Using "probably" with "should" is redundant, not to mention clunky to read. Dear William,

Sorry, can’t edit posts here. You can delete the comments if you want. Doesn’t bother me. I’m just a bit irritated about the errors and have no way of contacting people privately.

But anyway, I don’t think the way your sentenced is worded is wrong, just a bit confusing and clunky. It does make sense without using the “he”. But if you use the “he” your sentence will be a lot clearer. And if you use “he”, then you can take out “probably”. Using “probably” with “should” is redundant, not to mention clunky to read.

]]> By: warren http://news.filefront.com/perkins-coie-partner-to-lead-computer-and-video-game-group/comment-page-1/#comment-1027 warren Thu, 24 May 2007 00:44:21 +0000 http://news.filefront.com/perkins-coie-partner-to-lead-computer-and-video-game-group/#comment-1027 "so should" = "so he should"? That's four errors in four straight posts... “so should” = “so he should”?

That’s four errors in four straight posts…

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